that sucks man it was still very good though
The similes and metaphors in this were pretty terrible, but I liked it nonetheless. :P
hahahah wat!!!! wat a suprising twist very creaive loved every page of it!
I throughly enjoyed this story, and wish to see more. Thank you for providing a feast for the mind, eyes, and ears. VERY well done/
Excellent. Though it should be:
"Here is the 'cheque'."