cool
i like it very much.
i know its not to good but for your first time with flash. i dont like it that the others are so negative.
Dj-tom
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It is crap but it took 3 wks. I will do a better one later.
ok...
i think it is good but i gave you 7 instead of 10 because u need more characters, thats 1 point lost. it looked like a little kid drew it thats another point gone. and for the last deducted point it was too short. So that is why i deducted 3 points.
learn to draw
the art was bad but the story was okey
if you improved your drawing this would have been very good
its a masterpiece
not rly but still with better graphics it would be
eh it was ok
it was not too bad but it did lack good quality on both sound and video. Also i did not really see much of a comedy or any form of entertainment in it, you have potential, but it is not properly displayed in this video.