Just another test. I know there is no sound, deal with it. Please help me make my flashes better at least!
P.S. That means reviewing!!!
P.P.S. Okay, I can see that I need sound and color. But first, where can you get good sound effects?
P.P.P.S. I will make an updated version as soon as SOMEBODY TELLS ME WHERE TO GET SOUND EFFECTS!
I love cockatiels
You also show some promise with animation, but Newgrounds is not about test movies. It's also trivial to do some research and learn how to add sounds and colorize vector graphics. It's a pity, with just a couple of hours extra work you could have made something actually worth keeping. I'm giving this 3/5, but don't expect other reviewers to be as understanding.
You like cockatiels? Do you have any at home? But anyway, I guess you're right. I just whipped this up in my free time while i was on vacation in florida. lawl!
how to Improve
Add sound and maby some colour, and if your flash is that long you should add more plot
Yeah that's kinda what i think too. I got animator's block, lol.
Actually...
Quite enjoyable!
I don't know why, but this was good!
well done.
Thanks!
I know you told us but...
This piece lacks music and sound, and it truly needs it. It's a relaxing flash, with its own charm as far as the art. With a little work it could be very good, but you've got to draw us in.