Not bad.

I liked it, although mostly because I too have the Bamboo Fun tablet. It was pretty entertaining... even if we have to wait until the music stops to play the easter egg. I actually lol'd when the disk got shredded. For what can be improved... the art. It was very good, but there is always room for improvement, no? You did really well portraying the emotions of the characters, such as when you had big eyes as you saw the tablet. The use of music was perfect in this movie, except for the easter egg glitch, of course. Here is a way to fix it, however: in the actions of the easter egg button, in the line after onRelease or onPress, put " stopAllSounds(); ", and as you may have guessed, all sounds stop as you click the button. You could also put it in the actions of a frame of the easter egg, but it would have to be in one that has no sounds that you actually want played in it, or else they, too will get stopped. To re-upload it, go to My Account > Flash Submissions (Under Flash Portal Options) > Edit (for this flash). I have no idea what process it would have to go through(I've never done it myself), but I assume that it will just replace the current one. Please give me feedback on if this helped you!

wow just wow

this was REALLY BAD

Hah! That was pretty funny.

Hah! That was pretty funny. Good work on the comedy, voices are allright and art though, well to be flat out honest the art sucks, BUT just keep practicing your control, use layers and learn to use GRAPHICS, MOVIE CLIPS and FILTERS. Keep up the flash and you'll get it eventually! PS Much better than your Newgrounds Advert!

Overall - Bad

( Good Features )

- N/A

( Bad Features )

- The drawing is horrible and looked like it came from MS Paint
- The animation wasn't very good looking
- Too bland for any entertainment to be going on
- Overall has an extreme lack of effort

( What You Could Improve On )

- The drawings
- The animation
- The length
- The effort
- The boringness

( Overall )

I give you a 2/10 for the lack of effort, and do believe that you can do better. I recommend that you add voices and maybe look at some good art tutorials or books to really catch the viewer's eye and give them an idea of what to expect in the future and get you more views. I also think that you might want to look at the tutorials here on Newgrounds to make it a little interactive so the viewer is kept busy and hopefully entertained. Also, I think that you may want to joint the characters to make them move more realistically. Good luck on improvement!

~ The-X-Button
( Good Features )

- N/A

( Bad Features )

- The drawing is horrible and looked like it came from MS Paint
- The animation was choppy and wasn't very realistic
- There wasn't much action taking place, and left me bored

( What You Could Improve On )

- The drawings
- The animation
- The storyline
- The attention-grabbing

( Overall )

I give you a 1/10 for the lack of effort, and do believe that you can do better. I recommend that you add voices and maybe look at some good art tutorials or books to really catch the viewer's eye and give them an idea of what to expect in the future and get you more views. I also think that you might want to look at the tutorials here on Newgrounds to make it a little interactive so the viewer is kept busy and hopefully entertained. Also, I think that you may want to joint the characters to make them move more realistically. Good luck on improvement!

~ The-X-Button
( Good Features )

- N/A

( Bad Features )

- The drawing is horrible and looked like it came from MS Paint
- The animation was choppy and wasn't very realistic
- There wasn't much action taking place, and left me bored

( What You Could Improve On )

- The drawings
- The animation
- The storyline
- The attention-grabbing

( Overall )

I give you a 2/10 for the extreme lack of effort, and think that the drawings are the biggest problem. I recommend looking at some of the drawing tutorials here on Newgrounds or there are some great books out there. I also think that, considering the blockyness of the drawing, you drew slowly. Here's a pointer; when you're using a tablet, you have to visualize the line you want to make and quickly draw it for smooth looking work. Otherwise, the animation wasn't very well done, and there are again some great how-to's out there and they can be very helpful. Also, the plot was a little bland and didn't really entertain me, and I don't really think anyone else will be. Well, that's about it. Good luck on improving!

~ The-X-Button

maaan....

so you wanna tell me that you made those graphics w/ your new tablet?
you should have worked on your drawing skills before buying one buddy... really.. so you better practice hard now or i'll come to your place, get your tablet and give it back to you when you're better.. no offense, just practice.