Well nice video but i wanted more action in it but. It was good

hellyeah

lol
"everything looks fine...except that window"

great

Fair enough.

Lol. Give it all you've got haha. I'm so proud lol. Ep.2 has to out-do this one like fuzzles, k?

Hahaha!

That was so bad it was brilliant!

Overall - Bad

( Good Features )

- N/A

( Bad Features )

- The drawing is horrible and looked like it came from MS Paint
- The animation was choppy and wasn't very realistic
- There wasn't much action taking place, and left me bored

( What You Could Improve On )

- The drawings
- The animation
- The storyline
- The attention-grabbing

( Overall )

I give you a 1/10 for the lack of effort, and do believe that you can do better. I recommend that you add voices and maybe look at some good art tutorials or books to really catch the viewer's eye and give them an idea of what to expect in the future and get you more views. I also think that you might want to look at the tutorials here on Newgrounds to make it a little interactive so the viewer is kept busy and hopefully entertained. Also, I think that you may want to joint the characters to make them move more realistically. Good luck on improvement!

~ The-X-Button