Your friend should upload his work into the Audio Portal on NG, that was some talented work there!
The flash was a bit repetitive, as well as really basic stuff, but it's OK for being by a noob as you said.
The music definitely won it for me though.
hey have you thought of putting this is the audio portal
Just like what HelloLilly said below, it gets repetitive and boring but that's only because you made some parts of it a bit to long.
The idea is also interesting as a robot has to fix his computer with was ironic and made me smile.
Good job for your first flash animation.
Not bad!! :D
It is really good for your first flash animation but is kind of boring and repetitive.
Keep going I would like to see more