good job

I really liked this flash i admire the creative vision of your story and where it could lead

im very much the same in art style with you so im gonna give you the same advise people have given me thats to just spend a bit more time on the drawings it can get a much better appriciation of it
keep it up hope to see another chapter

Really man?

same old story, everythings looks bad and what is the black thing with the bennie even sospose to be? i just ont understand your score