You have alot of potential, you obviously know what you're doing. Keep at it, and submit more finished work.
Good luck, hope to see you in the future.
Uhm... finish it?
Yeh, the art was nice and all but finish it. I mean comon. The drawings were incomplete. And don't call that style... that's not stylistic.
good art style, but...
not much of a real story. come back when you learn to write dialogue
Gawd, I just - I really gotta say, man. You're dumb. You're a dumb stupid-head, and your comment stinks like dick. Of all the things to criticize, you chose story. Stupid idiot. Do you criticize the story in a knock-knock joke? Or in a painting? How about the artwork in a math book? You're SO MUCH WORSE than the guy who said that the cartoon has no style.
10/10 5/5...not because I liked this movie or your singing, however, I found your artistic style to be outstanding and extremely unique. I'd really like to see a lot more of your styling. Good Luck