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this is just a preview of what i'm working on, i know you all may want to blam this but please leave a comment on what you think...


i really need to know how this can be...or atleast waht you all think on what my drawings and that is so far, i know its really short, but i will post up the next one soon...i hope so anyhow -_-


Song (c) Disney and All American Rejects


Character and skeleton (c) me and my sister

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alright....

Hey... It isn't that bad of a flash, it's just too damn short... If it were longer, I'm sure it would have a much higher score. You can't get any better unless you're willing to take the criticism and learn from it though. Good luck.

very good!!

Seriously guys ... if you dont have any nice things to say .. then please dont bother to post a review .. Shes still practicing and i think its a tremendous job ....

I think your video is awsome sis ^^ keep up the good work

Not horrible, but could certainly be better...

The drawing weren't bad or anything, but they could definitely be improved. Also, the animation was rather choppy at parts, particularly when he exhales. Try adding more frames to make it flow more.

Well...

I'm not entirely sure what you're trying to do with this.
I love that song, but I dont know what you're up too with trying to add AMR?
Cause the vocals are kinda screatchy, and not all that great. I've seen worse for animation, so its not that bad, you've got some ideas here, i'd like to see what you've done with it when its done. But it does need work. Good luck..

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