ok?

maybe you could of added some sound whats with the weird shadows under the feet are they like floating and maybe you could exlpain the plot a bit more but pretty good for a school project just add a bit of music to make it more intresting :)

Needs Some Work

While the still graphics don't look terrible, the incoherency and the way the graphics don't seem to match up, as well as the lack of audio (Not just a music track, that could have been optional if you had even some sound effects), earn this a very low score.

The biggest problem is how nonsensical it seems. It feels like something taken completely out of context, and everything moves too fast for the watcher to garner the plot.

The animation looked very odd - the girl with the rice bowl seemed to float rather than walk, and the way the man ate it just looked awkward and wrong. The appearance of the monster(s?) at the end was absolutely confusing, and the glowing and changing segment even more so.

Wait...

...what? What just happened? ANYWAYS. No sound, wierd gradient shadows, wtf just happened with no real explanation plot, and sorta short. But it was a school project I guess and pretty good for your first project...

I know

You said you couldn't find the audio to fit it...but the thing is...it really needed some audio because it was very boring. The tweening of that ... monster into a tree also looked rusty and poorly done.

spend more time on your animation to make it flow smoother and PUT audio of some kind in it. If you can't find one, make it a priority to find one.