it ended to fast

Seems okay, but rather short.

Music

It need some music. Other than that it's fine.

Why?

This is the second looney-toons style cartoon video I've seen tonight that is absolutely devoid of sound. It's not that hard, people. You just import the file to the library, go to the frame's properties, and tell the flash to play the sound you imported. It's so easy, yet, so many submissions are completely missing any kind of music or noise, or what have you. Which is a shame, because animation like this one would be much more entertaining if I could actually HEAr what was going on. I have a policy that states I can only give, at most, a 3 to any submission without sound. If you're only going to give me half the experience, I'm only going to give you half a score.

Desperately in need of sound

The animation and artwork were pretty good, while the story, though not fully original, was satisfying. However, this movie definately needs some sound. If not for sound effects, at least add some music (perhaps even try to syncronize it with the animation at certain points).

Depending on the sound, this would deserve a rather higher grade, even though it is still a good movie... nice way of capturing the characters' emotions, by the way. My vote of 6 stands provided you will add some sound... then again if the sound is really good it might give you a 7.

Keep up the good work.

in a nutshell:

rock and roll! love the street car scene. you did me proud. hook up the sound boy!