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This is one of my first made movies so if you want to give some hints, you're welcome
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Oh well.. i liked it

i thought this was pretty good

i liked the idea of what happens when he gets hit.. if its your own idea, congrats.

for a first try, this was good. (no, i didnt say "not bad", i said good for a first try)

I dont like it. But is not a bad begining.

The history is poor and the animation mediocre. But I think that it´s not a bad begining.
Possibly in future you make best movies.

Not very good

To be honest i didnt like it. I didnt think the animation was very good and i dont really like the storyline. i thought i idea of bringing up the X-ray pictures was very good. Overall could do with improving.

uhhhh

=Pros=
Random humor. Always a good one.

=Cons=
Unrefined animation. Could use a lot of work. No plot at all. It looks like you put this together in five minutes.

=Overall=
If you worked on this a bit more, this could definitely *pass judgement*. try working on your stuff more.

j-enom responds:

yes i'm trying XD i'm just figuring out the program, once i got it there will be some better things poppin' out

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Votes
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Score
1.88 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 7, 2009
12:46 PM EDT