I was amused
Arts not that good, but it made me rofl. That's a first today. Maybe generous, but 10/10.
Author Comments
ahh, tht feels better, its done, finished, thank god. right, i know its short but like, read the title dumb ass's its ment 2 be short. i would of liked it to be longer, but due to a lack of ideas it just wasnt possible. reason why it took so long isnt becuase of animation but my lazyness and ideas. anyway, i hope you like it, only short but oh well
This was cute
This was cute, you presented some good art, and even the voices were ok, i think you could greatly improve on this if you added some subtitles, the voices are notbad but it would make it easier
Anyways nice job
~X~
Seriously, not bad.
Sure, it wasn't the best ever, it wasn't all that funny, but you definitely have potential. You definitely deserve better than the hate you're getting for this. Just work on the jokes and your animating abilities a bit and you could get the front page eventually, just keep working at it.
honestly
not that great. not that funny, but i could tell you tried.
jbobby12 responds:
ok, thanks for bieng able to see that i tried, beacuse i did, and belive me i will try better with my skills and comedy writing
Potential
You have got some potential, and that chocalte rain part made me laugh.
If i where you, i would make a story instead of a very short compilation of short movies.
This flash would have got a 8 if it were longer, i know you said it was meant that way. But just try to have more content. 7/10
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