Meh
Seen better
Author Comments
This is the first flash I've ever made. So don't judge it just by the actual animation, but by the content instead. I know it's not great, nut again, it's my first one. Hopefully, you'll like it. Enjoy!
The song is Clarity by John Mayer
Pretty good
Pretty good for a first flash. You likely ought to use more frames per second, so that the animation is less choppy.
Also, let's not hate on Americans- some of us can grasp the concept of gendered articles just fine. (That's what 'le/la/les are, definite articles)
Not bad =)
For a very first flash animation it is pretty good
But I confirm what Ramber said, We're bored of these americans who can't use French pronouns correctly, it could use a correction =p
Not bad for a first shot
keep up the good work.
Errr, and i don't want to get all french teacher on you, but you're supposed to say "LA ligne" instead of "LE", because it's a she-word and everything.
Is it a pronoun? Hell, i don't know how you english speakers call it. Nevermind.
Anyway, good luck on your next cartoons.
Well..
Not bad at all. I mean the animation isn't all that great but did a pretty good job of it. Nice pick in music as well. Great work on it. Just need to work a little bit harder on the animation and you should be just great.
Overall 6/10 and a vote of 2