what.

OMG like majorly. if this is a game than i gues Grand Theft Auto San Andreas Is a movie.

hmm

i can tell your not very good at english - well anyway it wasn't that bad WAY too short.

LOL

Justice quite funny

Needs Lots of Work

Hey.

First of, there are some grammatical errors in your opening message. Change it to something like this (corrections are in all caps):

"There WAS ONCE a hotdog seller, but his stand HAS been closed by agents. Now (INSERT COMMA HERE), he WANTS revenge."

Hope that makes sense. Let me know if it doesn't.

Now, onto the video.
- It's your typical 5-second kill-fest with blood. Nothing new here.

- Add some more content to it, and include some unique ways that the characters are killed off. Different weapons, maybe start with a pistol, then an automatic weapon (sub-machine gun, etc.), then maybe a bazooka, rocket laucher, grenade launcher, or even some hand grenades. You could always take a page from id Software's book, and try making a Railgun. (-:

Include some dialogue between the former hotdog seller, and the other guys.

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-Ziro out.

Im no grammar nazi but...

holy shit
this could have been so much greater