Pretty good
For being new to flash that was pretty good. I liked the facial expressions and that you used the paint tool to draw your characters. Try experimenting with 24 frames per second and using more frame by frame animation.
Author Comments
One of those things on cartoons where someone pulls out a gun and someone else pulls out a bigger gun, then first person pulls out an even bigger gun and the second pulls out an even biggerer gun-But with a twist.
I'm still new to flash and I'm still learning, so if you can offer help and tips on how I can improve in your reviews that would be great, thanks.
pretty good
very good for a beginner! was pretty smooth and the song was great!
good.
Funny and short!
I got it!
Yah, i guessed when i read ur comment! but still pretty good anyways! constructive criticism! more sounds than one tiny gun shot! either a faster frame rate or less frames, specially at the start and end, see? and ummmm yeh...... a song too! thats about it, apart from experience, and longer storylines other than one single joke!
Funny
It was funny but too short... Animation was good i think.
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