very bad,
you made it very glitchy and you need to work on the smoothness, the actions sucked and you need to work on sound.
Hey im back with another flash, iv gotten use to flash now so im a bit better. Tok me about a day to make this.Hey im only 12 years old..... Plz dont write bad comments, constructive critisism i dont mind.
very bad,
you made it very glitchy and you need to work on the smoothness, the actions sucked and you need to work on sound.
Not quite ultimate
But it wasn't that bad :)
Animation was a bit choppy but you'll get better, practices makes perfect!
i like it but
I like it but i donna really get it
good flash
The animating of the sticks was smooth, for the most of it, and you actually managed to create a animation which had objects which were destroyed or fell apart, which can become tricky, if you put too much detail into it
while remaining a simple and easy flash, you have been able to create a good movie.
This kind of thing, however, can actually be done in several other programs, such as pivot.
if you want to create a background, add a new layer, and put it below all the other ones. then you can draw one :)
Could be better
Right now the movie is sort of hovering just above blam territory. It's a little crappy in some areas, but some music and having a start button would greatly help. That being said, it's a good flash considering your age and the fact that it only took you about a day to make. If this does get blammed, don't feel discouraged. You clearly have an interest in flash animation, and that is something that will help you to create better flashes in the future.