I wish you'd animate them...

Fortunately, this is a while ago, with your animation resume, so there is still hope! Get out there, draw some good images and animate them properly. From here, you'd be able to capitalise on the effect of the zombie flick and at least have a little combat, before CorpsegrinderClock knows that it's too much and he blows his head off.

I'm hoping that you're able to come up with something for Clock Day this year, as it would be nice to see a very well thought out piece that really does give us a feeling that you care about what you're producing. I like the additions to the images, like the blood and the wounds, but it's not quite there. Drawing a watermelon is simple enough, followed by putting a clock face on it. The clock animation style is one of the easiest, so keep working at it and show us what you're capable of!

[Review Request Club]

Eh.

-This is probably the worst cropping i've seen in a while since all you did was cut out some squares of the characters. You didn't even bother to get the edges of the clocks. Then you pasted them on some pictures that you found by searching the internet.

-I did like the use of real voices instead of complete text or speakonia voices since it makes the quality of sound go way up. The ending wasn't what I had pictured and it would of been better if you would of animated it instead of just ending it.

-Review Request Club

It improves

I couldn't help but notice a distinct lack of music.

You really did build up some suspense there, before bursting it all with a 10-second flash.

This could be a pretty cool flash, a cool plot, with Night of the Living Clocks. But you didn't put any effort into it, and it ended up being just a poor spam flash.

The clocks weren't animated, and nothing was cropped. You had two backgrounds, two images, and just pasted pre-made clocks onto them.

You should at least crop the images you use, as it can really improve the flash a lot, just having the pics cropped. Next step would be animating the characters. Animating the gun to turn on himself and then adding a muzzle flash shouldn't be too hard.

Get some actual, hand-drawn (in Photoshop/flash/whatever) backgrounds in could also improve it greatly, instead of having these pictures in the back.

Just put aside some more time to work on your flash, and you could really improve on it all. Putting in time and effort really does pay.

woa.

cool. an epic battle of a hero vs the undead, on a lone island. perhaps, the only way to end this battle on a more magnificent way is:
to make the heo, while dying, shoot with his gun the tank with the fuel, around it, and havet he mosnters die in the fire.. then our hero would scream ''i won, bitch''
and he would cry...

but it was really good. i liked especially the reloading (of the gun) scene, where he sawed off- the face of a monstr mayn

It was amazing

The eding was the most awsome thing, What a plot twist I never spected that to happen you are a geniuos!
Altouhg I didn't like the start to much yet pretty awsome stuff