not much there, needs subtitles, good animation
what was there was good, but there wasnt much there, animation was excellent, and thats really all that was there, although you could have put subtitles in :P
Author Comments
i needed 4 days to complete that flash, and yeah i know is short and without sound or history, i just made this animation for a friend who lives in argentina and she will left from her country, and when she told me she will left i just stoped my work and show her the animation.... im working in other animation more longer with sounds and trying to make a better one animation....but TY FOR score me =D xD
saludos de Mexico =)
Disregarding the graphics, pointless
There wasnt much to this. No story, no speech just a girl opening her mouth. I'll admit, I though the graphics were ok, but why didnt you use your skills to make it longer and make something better. No wonder this didnt get far. Keep animating but make them more interesting. 2/10.
Very anime like
I must say this is very anime like. The job you did on the hair and the eyes are very detailed. The angle given also gives it a cool effect. Even the grass works to that effect I guess. I love what you did here. Although you could have tried to keep your lines smoother. This animation was very short, so I hope that you will submit something longer next time. It will also guarantee you a better score! ;)
A nice first submition, I hope to see more of you in the future!
Artsy
Well, it looked great to say the least. You could have added more animation. If all your flash looked like this, had a great storyline and smoother animation then awards will be flooding in!
Great but
It simply isn't good enough to be elidgible for the big bad portal. Although this is an incredible piece of illustrations, it just wont survive for long.
You need to put more into your submissions, make it long enough, and good enough, so it has a chance (even if it be a small one) to appear on the front page. Because anything could stimulate tom's brain.