i love it

pretty cool and you dont lack be dont have a englesh version you lack be dont have a portuguese version

That's fantastic!

The only thing I'm going to mark you down for is the lack of an English version. While I don't think it should be *required*, you have to realize that most of your audience is probably not bilingual. Myself, I have a decent grasp of high-school Spanish, but that only enabled me to understand half of Capitulo, and I had to interpret the rest from what was going on. If you want to appeal to more people, you really should get someone to help you do an English version as well. You seem to have excellent flash skills, doing a translated shouldn't be a problem, so long as you're willing to ask for help.

I am assuming that you actually read English, since you're able to use Newgrounds well enough, but to be on the safe side...

... debes escribir esta Flash en Ingles, y si necesitas ayua para traducirlo - prejuntalos.

The beginning is too long.

The rest was ok.

Needs English, though.

oh well..

The opening should be skip-able, watching it, even for the first time, was pretty annoying.

English

This is a primarily English speaking website and flash should have at least an English translation, if it's not a requirement it should be.

You get a 1 because it looked very well done despite me not being able to read what was going on.