lol

that happened last year

i see potintal unlike you pesamistic twits

the first short was the best, if you do more stuff like that in a non-perverted way you will get a good fan following, and that is the best way to the money (metphoricly speaking since there is no money in it for you untill you become a pro), fan following means that you will have people that will like your animations no matter how stupid they are.

It wasn't spam...

Well, I see that there's at least some effort put into this, but the effort if futile. Most of the animation was made up of tweens, movie clips that repeated itself, and...

That's it. Nothing else.

Your characters where... Bland. I mean, none of them had any distinct features in their personality, which made it really hard to stay focused throughout the movie. And when you said shorts, you meant REALLY short. It was actually hard to stay focused on what was going on during the movie.

The animation itself was an eyesore. You should try to put more effort into your later movies, because you can't finish a good flash movie within a day. a good one takes a month or two, so you have to be patient.

(Nintendavin)

It came pretty strong, but.....

Its just not finished. The score would have been higher if you'd just gave it a better end note.

Uhh...

I have a hunch that you shouldn't submit unfinished things to Newgrounds. And it wasn't really funny, either. You need to work on your tweening.