well
needs to be a bit longer and it needs sound but besides that that was really funny
Author Comments
This started as a politically obscene consept. I'll not say what that was.
My friend and I came up with this. Neither of us use at&t, we were just joking around about their 'more bars in more places' add (that's their's, right?) and we came up with this. Since my friend has absolutly NO flash skills, I animated it.
This is the first time I ever programmed something using AS3. I made the preloader. :D
Enjoy!
Has potential
But needs to be longer, and with sound and preferably voice.
IJP290 responds:
Finally something positive! Thank you for your constructive criticism.
Err...
Whilst the wordplay on the whole AT&T commercial thing was slightly funny to some people...It's about as good as submitting a bouncing ball on here. Work on making longer flashes with better animation and maybe (just maybe) sound >.<
IJP290 responds:
go see my previous animation if you want longer and better.
and go see my responses to previous reviews whilst you're ar it.
LAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1. to short
2. sound/music
3. AT&T does not suck u just have some other network. you know what AT&T has that the other networks don't? IPHONE!
IJP290 responds:
3)I don't even have a cell phone.
2)I was gonna add sound, and I still am.
1)deal with it.
How this got past the judgement is beyond me
Trying to make a positive review, is quite difficult. There was no sound, It was short and probably meant nothing to its NG audience. Not very enjoyable to watch either. It was a few bars that moved around and changed colours, not exactly great animating. Why not try something that has a better point, or a plot. It looks like you have the basics of flash, why not use it better? 1/10.
IJP290 responds:
It's commercial length. And this is what some commercials ARE. I didn't add sound because I never had the time or the will to go looking for SFX, or to record voice. I plan on adding them eventually
This I consider to be practice. If you don't like my practicing, then don't review. Practice makes perfect, not the other way around.
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