Improvement required

Yah, working with Flash is not something you quickly do and finish. The animation wasn't the greatest and spelling corrections is definatly needed. Like art, it requires some critical quality work, not to say you didn't put work into this. But this is almost like a quick sketch as oppose to a beautiful masterpiece.
If you take you're time and practice, then perhaps you will able to make something
that catches more viewers. ;)

THAT WAS AWESOME!

That was so funny "super-hot-actor" lol, it was brilliant. 5/5, 10/10, great job

PS: The drawing were a bit crappy, but the voices and words were funny, lol

dude...

cmon man unless your 5 years old you should have atleast checked your spelling, the animation wasnt very good and even the drawings werent very good...sorry dude gotta give you a 0

bad

This flash was utter terrible. The grammer was bad, and the drawings were sloopy, fix the grammer and spelling errors and redraw the characters better and this flash could improve. Also make it longer and the anticlamatic ending was just horrible. You can do better.

Good Idea Bad Anime

The idea is nice i suppose but the animation isn't so good try to work on that make the movements better get a better voice actor and it's gona get some good score :)