haha
Dude, you finally got round to doing some flash :) nice, very gentle touch with the simplistic music to the simplistic flash, i like alot, keep it up mate
5/5!
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Buttons incorporated!!! This was really short and finished in one day. Believe it or not it's about 25 seconds in length. It doesn't look like much and I probably could have done more but i'm proud of myself of it considering I'm new to flash so i like it. I just did this as an example and kept on and this was the outcome.
***EDIT*** I added a crappy easter egg and it's pretty easy to find. It's at the replay menu. Theres not much else to find other than it.
First try, okay
Perfectly understandable that you made it short. Try making storyboards for longer projects; plotlines are much more manageable that way. Even you don't make another animation for a year, get some practice drawing in Flash (and on paper) to improve your skills. Make sure you take advantage of the Lessons provided within the Flash program, if you haven't already; you can find it in the Help menu.
Not a bad start. Keep working on your skills, and don't join a crew.
coddude321 responds:
thanks. I'm definitely gonna write some storyboards in the future. I'll add scripts and dialogue. Like I said, this was just kind of a trial and error but it turned out better than I would have thought. Future flashes will totally be longer with plots and voices. Better stuff overall, but thanks for the review and I won't join a single crew.
First?
If this was your first or second flash... I give it 2 stars. Keep it up!
coddude321 responds:
yah this is really my first flash. I'm dreaming of some other stuff that I would work harder on and make much more... complicated i guess. But in the future they will be better.
