hey i thought i was ok
this is your first submission, yes? lol reminds me of the good old days when me and my friends from sixth grade would get together and make claymations at home, never submitted anything. but we had fun none the less, and thats what counts, you liked make in yours right, and you like your animation, yes? so yeah, dont worry about scores and points and that junk, just keep practicing and you'll get better. i would also suggest getting some of your friends to join in with you, so you can have more variety to your voice overs. good luck to you in the future.