Needs more.

This flash as CyberMeat said, was way too simple. The storyline wasnt really that great to tell you the truth, mess around the storyline D:
A little music would've helped alot.
Your drawings are alright... i guess...

Animation, sound, storyline

Animation was too simple, and lack of ANY sound is just not good. Storyline could have been a hell of a lot funnier with sound and decent animation. I picture the Hobo pissing on Jack's leg.

Well.

Despite the lack of sound, and not much animation except for motion tweens, there were nice elements in this. The graphics were ok - the interaction worked pretty well - but the best part was your sense of humor. It was funny and well written: the lack of spelling mistakes makes it more intelligent than most text driven humor found in these parts.