very cute blee
really nice concept~
i adore your style too~
the sounds just made it all the better too~
only problem is it felt kinda' unfinished but w/e ily
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Just trying some new things out.
I can never make anything of length but hey! I'm trying.
31 seconds worth of animating.
Took me way to long.
Was it worth it? Yes.
left4blee responds:
<3 {: I know exactally what you mean.
It just abruptly ends. :<
It's good :)
It's actually something I would watch more often if it was longer, perhaps making it into a sequal :)
left4blee responds:
Haha. Not going to happen but I am gonna be working on some new stuff soon.
Not so much the same style but who knows, you might like it. (:
Interesting
I thought the animation was pretty good to be honest, however the standard of art was not on the same level. But I definitely think you got the timing and movements correct, and the sound effects worked really well.
left4blee responds:
Thank you. I'm not much of an artist which you can obviously tell from this animation. I have a decent concept of the basics of animation (anticipation, timing etc) and the sound effects are all thanks to pepper. He did an awesome job.
Technically, this was OK, but...
I still gave it a pretty low vote.
I thought it was unoriginal, short (I get that it has [short] in the title, but why? Were you impatient to submit it?), and pointless. Where is the alien from? What is the purpose of it's visit to earth? Why couldn't you have made earth spherical, instead of just a messy blob?
No doubt this'll make it through the portal, as it has some blood and a dead rabbit in it, but you probably have enough skill to come up with a better story than this.
Try harder.
left4blee responds:
Yeah, I understand completly. It's my first submission to NG. I was just losing interest in it because as you pretty much stated it wasn't a very well thought out story. I was going to make him continue to eat untill he got big enough to destroy the city but failed horribly. haha
As for the earth, I have no idea. lol. My friend even asked me why I used the line tool/shapes for the buildings but not the oval tool for the earth. I didn't really see it as a big problem.