WHY IS IT

that every time I write a review someone has to delete it well here you go I thought the use of artic koala and LYRICS NOT WRITTEN BY ME were very approproriauatne in this movie and the representation of Kennedy's lifehood pain and The Great Gatsby were outstanding in this film I think the animation was absolutly beautiful and I'm glad it is up here to open my eyes to what life is these other people do not understand the concept of vague concepts but we all can love BABY

huh...

this in a nutshell needs work. i can see some gems in the sewage, but there's a LOT of sewage...

GOOD THINGS:
+you put some music (your own music, i might add), and that's a great first step
+it was well colored, and had some artistic flairs into it (like the black and brown outline of the beetle)

BAD THINGS:
-there were several glitches during the flash. make sure to go over your work before you submit!
-i wasn't crazy about the songs... yeah, that's personal opinion, but i'm allowed that, aren't I?
-you need to learn how to spell.

3/5 and 6/10. there's a lot of room to improve

hmmmm

I would vote 1 but since you apologized at the end for making a crappy movie (it's in the credits I'm not being mean) I got a good cheap laugh so I'll give you a 4/10 and 2/5. Nice concept but longer story with more sense would be nice.

Also why did the bar tender turn into a duck?

Yikes

I know you said this is your first flash but did you even bother to edit?

+2 For music
-8 For animation

Don't submit to the portal if you can't stand people voting bad, it will happen.

Why did people...

O.K, I realize it's your first flash, but next time make the animation better, and try to have a good storyline.