good

this is a great movie maybe you should make a new movie some day but
make it longer get more jokes in there and try again

Long and sloppy, like my pe

I watched the whole 10(?) minutes of this, so I feel obligated to review it.

You were obviously trying to mimic David Firth's style (or you were at least inspired by him), and I think that actually helped you out.

THE BAD:
The lip sync wasn't very good at all. It seemed like you drew mouths in the style of David Firth, then randomly moved them when there was dialogue. One time I noticed you just put an oval over the villain's mouth to make it look like he was talking.

The story was very sloppy and it seemed like you made it up as you went along. I understood the beginning, a man invents a potato chip that will save a company from going downhill, but the middle/end had me extremely confused. It seemed like you threw the villain in there to extend the length or maybe because you didn't like the story you had so far.

The backgrounds were kind of cool in the beginning, but by the end they became messy renderings of images, some I could hardly distinguish (ex- the 'bar' background was pretty rough to look at).

THE GOOD
The voice acting in this was pretty good at some points. I think the narrator/main character/villain did a pretty good job with this. Some of the other voices could use a touch up, and the overall quality of the sound could get better, but the voices weren't horrible to listen to.

OVERALL
I can tell you half-assed a LOT of this. When I say a LOT I mean almost the whole thing. The story, animation, and backgrounds could all be extremely improved. You also could reduce the length by 45 minutes to make it a lot more funny, creative, and better animated.

I don't know why I kept watching this. It would've been so much easier to have closed the window. Maybe it was to see if it would keep going and going (which it did). There could be so much more I could criticize, but I don't want to spend any more time on this flash. I don't even care if my review doesn't make sense.

"YOU STOLE THE FIZZY LIFTING DRINKS. YOU BUMPED THE CEILING WHICH HAS TO BE WASHED AND STERILIZED, SO YOU GET NOTHING! YOU LOSE! GOOD DAY SIR!"

-Willy Wonka

Needs direction

I know you spent a lot of time on this but it would have been tons better if it had some solid story behind it.

Freakin' long...

Long, sucky animation, but very big effort, and this isn't a job what anyone could do, this takes time, a lot of time... Good job dude ;)

Keep practicing!,
Chinoman10.