Lack of effort

Now I do like the music chosen for this flash and it does go well with the people and style I presume you were trying to portray, yet for all this said it was very lazy looking with little or no effort on the use of movement.

I would have liked to seen some personal use of flash rather than 'cut outs' and a bit more about the placs and people involved in the flash itself, it was left way too empty in terms of what the hell it was all about, it diddnt feel like something a random person could get into.

Overall it needs work on the presentation as a whole, hardly newgrounds material yet oddly enough mabye if you added subtitles to the music may have upped the antie, but that is only a suggestion it can't be proven that adding sub would automatically improve your flash.

Buenos Dibujos

Trata de mejorar un poco el movimiento del personaje la proxima vez :)

Try to make a better movement of the characters next time :)

cool i gest

not that good

se ve padre

me gusto el opening se me hace que va a estar chingona tu serie. me avisas cuando salga :D

Ok...esta bien... creo

por que airman gatosenai...osea que al caso?