Meh.
3/5. It was a good try. But a small request, could you do the entire song?
Author Comments
Well this is an animation for the (hopefully famous) Duane and Brando Sonic rap. If you've not heard it go to www.myspace.com/theadvent uresofduaneandbrando and be enlightned.
This is not actually my first made Flash, got another better made Sonic Flash coming at some point, call this a test. So no "its crappily drawn comments" 'cause i know it is, just watch, enjoy and love Duane and Brando.
CammersJDL responds:
sloooowly getting to it, i'm making the next two verses atm
good start?
where's the rest and i love the fact that you used ant and dec!
CammersJDL responds:
haha it's one of those little known facts that sonic is buddies with ant and dec you know, keep it on the hush though don't want any gossip now ;)
Not too bad
Better than I could draw, to say the least.
Great song, bad transitions
The song was hilarious and the animation wasn't bad, but I have one major complaint. The drawings didn't bother me, but the transition from one scene to the next was way too fast 90% of the time. It made it very difficult to read what was on the screen (not the lyrics, just in general) and observe everything that was going on.
I would love to see this perfected/tweaked in the future because it really has much more potential. Overall, pretty decent though.
CammersJDL responds:
aaa yeah i know thats a problem particular at the start, it was more cause of how fast the rap was i was trying to time everything to it, might be a bit more lax if i make the other verses
lol
omg that was fricken funny as hell, i'm a super fan of sonic (as u can see with my name). the part where he hits eggman in the face and does it again, that was my favourite part.
CammersJDL responds:
thanx :D thought that was the joke i nailed
definitly go to duane and brando's myspace tho they rock