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MovingForward Teaser3

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Remember this is a teaser foer the "movingforward" movie i'm still working on... and i changed the text color length duration art (as in making the sperm not look like balloons) and added more exlainitory text in one scene..

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Good Job

Good Job Nice little teaser there.

Only problems would be that some text u cant read that well... (this is where the story begins) and the other thing is what is it about, like what genre

Very soothing

Hmm I've opened another tab so I could keep listening to the music after the movie ended. It's absolutely beautifull... What song is it?

At the start of the movie I saw some redering errors of the text which didn't make me expect what I saw next.

You animated the first part of life very nicely, I really liked the transitions. The way you animated the text as if you were typing it was very nice for this movie - although you could switch to a nice font and only use 1 font instead of different ones.

The text was very fitting to the movie. I'm really interested in the final version of this movie. I hope you can iron out the minor flaws from this trailer.

keolamation responds:

thank you for the contsructive critisism!! I started making new scenes but the art tuke soo long to draw it was very hard to animate so i might end up redoing it all pretty much...

Decent

I can see the point in the video, but I just didn't feel it. It needs to be able to hook the audience in it from the start, and this just didn't cut it. The animation was decent, but you can always use voice instead of the typing (it's a little annoying after a while). Also, make the topic a little more interesting for people.

1 and 2 were blammed

Why not take it as a hint that no one wants to see your crappy movie? At best, you barely going to pass this, how enthusticac do you think people are going to be over the real thing?
Find a different project

keolamation responds:

Congraz! you win the award for the biggest fucking idiot... EVER BORN!! this wasn't blammed before fuck nut.... the 1 and 2 actually had scores of 2.56 so this one is actually lower rated then the other ones.. which i dont get... but, You get to walk away from here with a great award of greatest idiot to ever live!!! CONGRATZ FOR Yu!

Though simple it may have been...

...the animation fit quite well with the simple piano BGM.

Great teaser!

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Uploaded
Mar 7, 2009
1:40 AM EST
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Experimental