wheres the sound?????
Not sure what to say... No music which is obviously bad but I dont have any submissions so what can I say?! It was ok.
Well ya beats me!
Was obviously not the best flash on newgrounds but hey its your first time which is still one more flash than ive made!! Well done!
Didn't understand the concept but....
I thought for a first ever flash you did pretty good agree with everyone else that sound/music makes any flash so thats a must for your next one but you've set pretty good foundations here....
wasn't much to it, but you did say it was your first flash, so I won't be harsh on you.
I liked the one kind of animation but didn't understand what was going on, maybe add some noise or sound, would have been good. But otherwise okay try for starting out.