I like it
You have really gone and added your own personal touch here, It shows it well in this flick, And I must say I was pretty impressed with your work here, and hope to see more of your movies. There was some interesting visuals here, and I believe thats what caught my eye with this one, nice job overall on this one. I like the Opportunity here on this flash, and Endorse this submission to others, I got some good enjoyment from this, There are a few instances that could be better, I hope to see more of your endeavors in flash works, soon. The Opportunity here built Momentum for this review.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright So here are some Minor Details that could work and weild some positive results, just adding some small flashy effects here and there would be nice.