It looks nice.
You need to export this flash again at 48 kb/s - 128 kb/s. experiment with the export settings. Change all MP3s into wavs. It wasn't bad but the timing really took away from the animation.
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EDIT: One very important thing, and I apologize to Joe(JoeandTom) about this, but I ended up screwing up the name of the song "Picnic in the Yard" in the actual credits. I ended up using the name in the file name instead. If I have a chance, I will fix it, but that may be a while D:
Not sure if "Hell no!" is mildly explicit content for people... but just to be safe! :D
Anyway, this is my first actual episode in terms fo a flash cartoon. It was created because we had a lip synching assignment in 2D animation and I decided to go a bit overboard from the simple three-word assignment we were given.
As for plot: Toby is going for a job interview, though he know's nothing about what he'll be doing.
This is my first time submitting, so I'm hoping that I did this all correctly.
CaptRandom89 responds:
Thanks, I'll remember to do those things later on^^
it was ok
I liked it, story made me laugh at the end. But i had probleme with timing between animation and voice.
CaptRandom89 responds:
eck, I was afraid timing might get messed up somehow. The thing plays fine as an html document but in actual flash player, it gets really messed up.
I get a slight lag when I watch it myself, so I'm not sure what the issue is, but thank you pointing out that you are finding an issue.
Didn't really like out
Animation 5/5
Story 1/5
Sound 3/5
Overall there wasn't much point to this flash.
That was great!
I loved that, cheered me up. I hope to see more like that from you. =D - OG
