honestly this one was better then your previous flash because it actually had some decent jokes ngl

I lol'd

How this passed submission is beyond me, but if SBC could do it I guess you can too.

And to this response...
"Get a girlfriend, man!"

You can start talking shit when your balls drop, kid.

keep trying.

sorry, but this was really a poor excuse for a flash. the idea is there, but the execution is not. keep trying and working on it and you can get it though. good luck.

o.K?!

i WAZ TOTTALLY EXPECTING SOMETHING ELSE

Wow.. spammy..

And to think that I was the one to teach you how to properly credit other authors on "flashes"...

Animation/Graphics - Absolutely no points here at all. First off it seems like the theme that you had for this flash was to randomly draw shitty pictures and pretty much make everything terrible for some sort of humor effect? It didn't really turn out very well. The pictures were just drawn terribly. It honestly look liked a little kid drew everything with their eyes closed and just kind of guessed on where to put things.

I recommend practicing drawing for a long time before even thinking about submitting another "flash" again. If you were doing them like that on purpose just don't. It wasn't funny or anything of the sort.

You need to get flash if your going to make things like this. I'm all about movies here that aren't made in flash. I really enjoy things that aren't made in flash, but when you are making something like this it really needs to be animated. It needs to have the actual movement of mouths, arms, etc..

Story/Content - It might have been funny, but you really just tried to hard. It obviously make no sense so you were going for the random effect here, but it still didn't work for you. Perhaps if the animation itself was better the content would improve along with it.

Audio - Hmm, you need different voices for the different people talking. Again, if you were trying to go with something funny here using the same childish 10 year old voice then you just shouldn't. You need a different voice actor for each character or at least make a different voice for each character. You don't have a good voice acting voice either. You may want to work on that.

Overall - It really needs to improve in almost every section that I can think of.