that was actually so sick<3 bless up

Nice Job

As usual you have done very well.

Nothing special

I'm going to skip saying that this is short, because I'm pretty sure that you're aware of that.

Your characters look okay, although the guy talking by the tree looked like he had a Picasso-esque thing going on with his face which I wasn't sure if it was intentional or not. The lip synching took me by surprise, it was pretty good, but it wasn't connected to his face much, which kind of tainted it for me. The bodies don't move much at all, which really just isn't all that impressive to watch. A little random movement here and there would go a long way. Maybe have somebody scratch their nose or something simple like that to keep people a bit more interested in the characters.

The biggest problem though was that I simply have no idea how the two parts of this are supposed to be connected. They juxtapose one another in both style and content, which makes for a generous divide between them and made things feel incongruent. If they resembled one another in style, the comparison between the two situations would come off a bit better, and they wouldn't seem so at odds with one another.

Also, the chocolates to the face come a bit quickly. The transition hits us, and we see a random character get nailed in the face almost instantly. I couldn't figure out what happened until I saw the character get up. You might want to hold the shot for a second or two longer before the hit, to make sure that people see the set up and understand what's happening before it happens. Maybe have a little dialogue or something. A sound effect would help emphasize your character getting hit in the head. Also, you might want to show him lying on the ground to help with some continuity there and to make sure people get the joke.

Finally, you should put a little more effort into your backgrounds, it'll go a long way, trust me.

I realize I've said nothing good, and I don't want you to believe that I don't think this short has any potential. It does, I'm just being critical. You seem to have a good sense of where you want to take this short and a funny idea behind it, you just need to put in a bit more effort in order to execute it. The music works well with the cartoon and adds to the tone, and although your characters are not the best drawn I've ever seen, they get the job done.

hmmm

pretty cool, the drawings and animations were both pretty good, and it was cool overall, the voicework was a bit quit at points though, and the first half and last half of the animations didn't seem to really fit together too well. Nice song though at the beginning, it was pretty cool.