okay then
the problem is that ts not colored. other tha that, its a decent piece of animatiom
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This is my FBF animation about Marcus Fenix from gears of war. It is not finished because it isnt colored, but I dont think I will ever color it because I would rather work on my game than to go on each frame and click the fill tool over and over again.
all sounds from Gears of War
Finish this!
Eventually you should get around to coloring/filling in some frames for this. its really nice and with some BG noise, colors, filler frames, ect it would be awesome.
Jereminion responds:
maybe when i feel like doing another i will color
Meh, ok
Well the movements and actions of the characters were pretty good, but there are a lot of things that need improvement. One, Colour would really bring this flash alive, because grey coloured characters on a grey background is relly dull to be blunt. The quality of the animation could use improvement, but your still poses of the characters were good. Lastly the video could be longer and some more sound effects.
Jereminion responds:
i think color would be nice but takes too long
Unfinished
This looks unfinished and i don't like unfinished submissions so i gave you a zero.
BUT with a little more time this could be a very VERY good flash movie.
Jereminion responds:
finished for me
nice stuff
Good for a partial but remember.. Unfinished projects go into the NG Alpha section, not through the Portal.
Jereminion responds:
finished