well, it seems that this one suddenly freezes in the middle of the animation, and I don't like that at all, that also because of the way you direct, it looks like a trailer that a complete sprite animation!!!

The sudden freeze in animation wasnt good that def needs to be fixed it seems like you were going in a trailer direction with this but otherwise not bad

Black out!

Is it supposed to completely black out after Toad says there's a letter for them? If not, I suggest you fix that.

does it end?

does this flash not end or did my computer freeze up?

Looks cool

7/10 because I couldn't get past the first line of dialogue, which I'm sure is the point of the 'preview' statement, but perhaps if you hadn't have added that and just made this a sort of 'movie trailer' deal, would've been rated higher. As for the oncoming series, good luck with it, I'm certainly excited to see how it turns out.