hmmm
not bad for a first flash but needs more of a story and to bit longer
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Don't watch this if you don't wanna, maybe even take it off, but I just wanted to give it a try..
Ehh its choppy
It is choppy and obviously rushed. The shots looked like crap and it just isnt that good. Check out the madness tutorials and get the spirate packs dont forget the feat. and you got to use alot of layers to make a good madness vid.
Ehhhh... its ok
Well, since it appears to be your first madness animation, its pretty good.
Just add feet, the bodies must be more smooth, and have a layer for each body part (1 for the feet, body, head, front hand, back hand, and put it in a folder, and name the folder) and take more time. Also, the hands were incorrect sometimes, each person must be unique, and please try some tutorials from youtube and newgrounds. They will give you some more advice. Anyways, hope you get better!
well..
not bad
bit short
but not baad... =]
Needs work.
Has potential but needs to be smoothed out and made slightly longer. The dialoge also takes to long to change.