Huh?
Was I meant to understand what just happened? Or is it one of those "post-ironic" flashes that are totally random, but people seem to just say "lol" a lot at?
Am I missing something here?
Author Comments
This is a story about a hardworking and struggling family that take an adventure to paradise. With promises of never parting from one another, they see what's in store for them. What they don't know is how strange their paradise really is.
The purple object is their house in fact.
It may not be very graphical but it shows a touching story.
Delop responds:
this isn't something to laugh at. why do you want to react how society reacts? just watch it on your own
review Time
Creativity: 0
Animation: 0
Presentation: 0
Interactivity: N/a
Humor: 0
Story: 1
Music: 0
Sound: 0
Dude this was really bad I'm sorry no offense this gave me a head ache in fact it was not touching it just had very annoying voice that could have been more better in another tone of voice...
The looks of it... this animation was not even planed it was more like some stupid stuff stuck together as you went, it had no creative mind in it... in this i mean you had no clue what you where doing and i think you should make your plot a bit easyer to do
things you should improve
Voice - bit annoying
Pictures - you should not really rush it and post little effort in your pictures just spend some time fiddling around and you will get somewhere.
well anyways it was alright but i wish you to post more to newgrounds and you will improve much better
Delop responds:
so did u like stop watching it? please watch it all
Hmm
i Really dont know how to rate this. It was interesting, the story was good i liked it but the grafix were well...not my type. Well enyways nice job ill give you a 6 for intriguing me ;]
very nice.
as you said it wasn't a graphical wonder, but the story is well worth my vote of 5.
Strange
Wow, that was very strange. I'm sure I would have given it 10 stars if I weren't sober lol, but at least it had some kind of plot. I had an attachment to the "Black Thing" that died at the end... So strange!