It is unfinished

It is weird how there were so many people that were helping you on something so short. It was a little difficult to even understand what the characters were saying. Seeing as how one of them appeared to be Mike Tyson, it is at least appropriate. The strongest point is probably how well the animation is! I do seriously think this could be put on a professional network as it appears to be more detailed than anything you have done before. With something so short, I can certainly understand why you would feel unfinished.

pretty good...

good job. Something about the voice-over work threw me off but I can't put my finger on it.....

Would make a great commercial.

Excellent movie. I think maybe you should raise the sound level on the man in the middle because I could not understand him very clearly. Other then that great animation, good work.

Mike Tyson... Lol

This movie was funny. You should give it a watch. It surpasses Seth Mcfarlane's mini shorts for BK.