nice
nice again =D
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My second flash only one day after the first.I really think i should spend more time on these but i feel that as they are they are teh lols.well this one is.any commentary is welcome apart from really really angry kinds.Theres an easter egg, well not exactly its more a Sun you roll over to have an image of a thing that you dont have enough time to look at during the animation.and yes i did give it away.
Pandangerous responds:
thanks again. :3---------------spagetti LOL
Well...
this was ok... but the music doesn't really go so well with it. Try different sound effects. The character was nicely drawn and the colors are good.
hmmm
VERY short, but well drawn and animated and fun to watch while it lasted, I wish it didn't end so suddenly though, it really looked like it was going to go somewhere, nice list of random insults as well, keep up the good work, but next time try a more climactic ending maybe.
Pandangerous responds:
yeah i use the list everyday and i would have ended it on an epic thing but i was tired and tought mabye ill edit it and resubmit later.
Hmmmm...
As in an honest review, it needs more animation, that went on for 17 seconds (or around that), I give it 6 just for the pure drawing done in this movie.
Pandangerous responds:
i think its my drawing style that stops all my stuff from being blammed and how did you know it went on for 17 seconds?
It went by a bit fast at the end
Good start! However It wasn't immediately clear why he ended up in jail other than that he's generally into crime?
At the end when it flips right back to the title screen without changing the music or anything it's a little jarring. I think the best flash to look at on how to do transitions is "Mr Hosue":
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /479196
You may want to borrow some style points from that for your next animations.
Pandangerous responds:
k thnx for the link ill take in your advice