votre projet
A few grammar mistakes as well as a lot of spelling mistakes - don't turn it in to your teacher untill you correct them!
Bonne chance~!
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*Edit* Looking back 4 years later... if this is what I could do in a day or two after having only a couple months of flash experience and being 13, I think I wanna take up (non shitty) animating again.
Well its not that great, but i did spend 2 weeks on it, and it would be a shame to not submit it. It in French, btw. J'aime fromage! :P
-Radicalace
note: i only spent about 10 hours total on this
im new to flash, and i dont have alot of time
radicalace88 responds:
i know... but i havent been taking french for that long and i dont have alot of time for flash anyway. thanks for being positive though.
Erm...
If you wanna make a flash in french, you could at least make it in correct french, because i can certify you that this is not.
Well, even without speaking of that ( i know that french is a REALLY complicated language, it seriously sucks ) the graphics are poor, the animation is almost nonexistent, there's no sound, and it is kinda repetitive.
Also, it seems that you're a kid, right? So i'll give you an advice: be patient. Believe me, we'll prefer an animation on which you spend like 2 month than a little movie made in 5 hours.
I got nothing else to say, make your choice.
radicalace88 responds:
well sorry- i dont have alot of time to work on my flash animations, im new to it- yes, i openly admit i suck at flash. but its fun to submit stuff anyway (im surprised it didnt get blammed!)
Not very good.
I refuse to blam this movie since you are clearly a child with a desire to become a great artist/animator so I will just give you a word of confidence, if you are making a flash animation present it at its best. If you are going to keep uploading this stuff you are only destroying your image.
Take your time and learn, keep trying until you perfect what you initially wanted to reproduce for people to see and appreciate.
Newgrounds is a fun site that lets different artist from all ages to upload and show their work but what you are doing is wrong, it is too soon for you to show your work, keep progressing in skill then make something everybody would love and appreciate.
radicalace88 responds:
hey hey hey-
i dont plan on being the best at flash- i mean, ill probaqly work some more on my animations later. but right now, its fun for me to just spend a few hours on some simple animations. i made this for a school assignment, and i though "hey, i like negrounds! why dont i post it there? if it gets blammed, it gets blammed! or if not, i can get feedback." right now, i dont have much time compared to someone who is for example in college and can spend alot of time working on a really cool animation. i might do that. right now, thats not something i can do. i just got flash about a month ago anyway.
I watched the whole thing
And I'm proud to say the I understood most of it!
I'm gonna be frank here- the animation was choppy, there was no music, you used stick figures, and I doubt this is going to pass. I, however, appreciated it for the sake of a project. I don't think it really would have worked quite as well if it was all professionally drawn and animated. Also, no matter how dry, some parts were funny.
I don't know how much you are capable of, but... I don't know, it was fine I guess.
radicalace88 responds:
please dont judge me by this- i just started using flash and i dont have alot of time to put into my animations. besides, if i have to do a project, i think "why not in flash, and then post it on negrounds to see what people think?"
it worked...
i title this it worked, simply because that was the most positive feedback i could give. For all those watching this I am sorry it worked. Heed my warning, this was made by a 10 year old who attended 2 french classes and thought it would be cool to turn it into a video... It wasn't. My advice to you is such, when you make a video next, have more catchy animation though this was still far better than what I could make I would not consider it up to newgrounds standers.