good effort
i hope this stays up man, just to give you confidence.
nice use of sounds (Y)
Author Comments
This is my very first flash movie. Our teacher taught us as we went, so sorry it's a little shaky. Please don't blam it! D: I want to show some friends and this is the only way I can! Thanks
P.S. At the end of the credits "The Worst Ninja" was the movie the guy sitting next to me made. Poor ninja...
DisappointedPeanut responds:
Thank you!
lol
i love it that even though the snail jumps... the slime is still coming out of its butt not even moving...
NOT SO BAD...
YOU FOR SURE HAVE POTENTIAL... WITH A LITTLE WORK AND PRACTICE YOU COULD MAKE A GREAT ANIMATION.
KEEP WORKING.
It was ok
Yeah it was decent especially if it was just an assignment. You've got your 'story' across and you used most animations pretty well.
Just a few suggestions though, first it would be nicer if, when the sun goes down, it actually becomes dark. (try fading all the colors blue-ish) Because now, the only way to determine day or night is the sun or moon. Second, if you fade the beginning and end of the falling sound and mix them together they're probably more loopable.
Last words, keep going ;¬)
DisappointedPeanut responds:
hm...it was soposed to change colors at night...
haha it's funny cuz i spent like 15min. getting the colors to change. It might of messed up when I transfered it from CS3 to CS4
IDK
Merf..
The snail gave no true facial expressions, it WAS shaky... But good work for a first. My first got blammed :\... I tried to make one... It was a music video.. And no- I'm not going to explain about that horrifying memory to ANYONE.
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