Delightful

You can really see the time spent on this flash. Peter the Penguin is a deep character, when I watched this masterpiece I really felt like I knew him. You really captured me, his spins were so elegant and his voice was raspy, but emotional. I loved the climax drama, where Peter the Penguin realizes that it's not actually a store, but Spin Love Zone. It made me laugh, cry, and love all at the same time.
10/10 5/5

Thank you for bringing meaning to my life.

naybe voice over isnt a good idea

try using speech bubbles or finding better equpment and putting more space between your mouth and the mic

Mic

Try using a better microphone, or try speaking with a little more sistance to the mic.