Good Effort
It was well mad, it had diffrent characters fighting and it was pretty funny, for this i give you a 9/10 good job dude =D
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YOSKIES!!!!!! well yeah this is my FIRST flash animation i didnt make ANY of the sprites or sound they came from diffrent websites so if u think this is your sprite sheets and sounds hit me up and i will give u cred!!! o well this is what i want BASHING if u see anything bad tell me SO I CAN LEARN!!!! and do better my username is fight 14 so u have 13 more comming your way so im going 2 try and make each one better then the last!!! ok so ENJOY!!!!
On your way
6/10 For effort!
I remember when I started doing flash. Just keep practicing and learning more. It seems like a really daunting task, but if you make each animation better than the last, then surely you'll get better.
Perhaps you could try non-sprite animations, yea it can be tougher, but the end result might be more to your liking. Although nothing is wrong with a good sprite video, either.
fight14 responds:
dude i would like to do an non sprite animation but my art work SUCKS stick figures are even hard for me lol
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this is really good you should try making this into a game
fight14 responds:
R U FUCKING CRAZY!!!!.....actually that sounds like a good idea!!!!!........but i dont know how....:(
Heh, I liked it.
As much of a fan as I am of Naruto I wasn't wanting him to win. Why'd you use Full Metal Alchemist Music tho? Lol. He should have been in there then! That's my request I think for the next one. Put in Edward. You used one of his songs, it's the least you could do, haha! We'll, I liked the flash. Good first submission. Some of it was choppy though. I was actually irritated by the choppiness of the words since a good deal of the flash was relatively smooth. Keep up the good work.
Not bad...
The song was good (cuz Ima FMA fan =P), and you seem to have the basics for sprite animation down. Now, of course, is time for you to up the Frames Per Second and make things smoother. You clearly have the idea for how they are made, but now is the time to go that extra mile and put more animating into those frames. I'd be careful of the lag, too. The animation was at a consistent speed for a while, them slowed down, so heads up.
However, when all is said and done, you did pretty good. But you still have a ways to go! Best of luck on your learning! Hope I was of help!
3/5 for the extra push to keep going!
~ShihanPK~
fight14 responds:
this is the kinda reviews i want!!! SOOOOO HELPFUL thanks man