agrees with eternal-judgement
Yea work on the drawings and background you got a great idea and being hand drawn if done right could get you front page keep it up.
Author Comments
DO NOT RATE THE CONTENT OF THE CLIP. I KNOW ITS SHORT. I NEED EVERYBODY TO RATE THE FOLLOWING:
*PRELOADER CLIP
*MENU EFFECTS (I KNOW THE CLOUD AND LIGHTNING IS DODGY, I FIXED THAT)
*QUALITY OF DRAWINGS
*FRAMES PER SECOND
REVIEW REQUIRED!!! WRITE A REVIEW AND TELL ME WAT TO IMPROVE ON!!!
NO HARSH THINGS. THIS IS MY FIRST REAL FLASH ANIMATION. NO MORE SPRITE ONES.
Now, do not start ranting at me "dont submit spam @%#%" or "useless crap", not even "why did u submit this?". I submited this for ideas cuz newgrounds has more users a day unlike deviantart. I need contructive comments, and newgrounds is the only place to get them
I NEED IDEAS!!! IF YOU ARE GONNA REVIEW, REVIEW ON WHAT TO IMPROVE AND WHAT TO TAKE OFF!!!! X_X
So those blind ones who didnt read this, why dont you just leave those type of things to yourself?
Oh wow, a Sonic flash...
That guy that said you wouldn't achieve anything in life is probably laughing out of his seat by now. You sure showed him....
well, for starters...
well if you want to make sonic and shadow look abit better i would suggest looking at a few sonic x clips and see that by simply adding another colour to each bit can make a whole lot of difference
Ok, not too shabby
Ok, first thing is first. The drawing needs a little more work, but is not bad as it is. Adds originality. Second, the menu clip (clouds and lightning) is fair good, but once again could do with a little work. Next, the preloader is fine as it is. Nice little acknowledgement for everyone who helped inspire you. I was so busy reading the thing that I didn't get a chance to see the preloader properly, but it looked pretty cool. Coulda done with a bit of action in the preview, but I guess you're currently working on that aren't you? Lol. Also, could be a bit quicker, but that may just be me. If you want any more on what to improve you need to keep checking to see if any of the other Flash Artists leave comments. Anyway, keep working on it dude, good luck.
Yeah.
For your first real flash, the preview looks great. A lot of the things you're probably worrying about should come with practice. I'm looking forward to the full video. And I'm sorry if this isn't as helpful as I wanted it to be...
