Not bad
Greats song but the animation could be improved, maybe make it smoother by adding tweens
Author Comments
The music belongs completely to Electric Lights Orchestra, another awesome band. The song is 'Mr.Bluesky'.
This was my very first flash! I made it for a commtech project; it's supposed to demonstrate man's negative effects on nature through pollution and exploitation.
I remember staying up til 3 on the night before turning it in. I thought I'd stayed up SO late!
Ah, so naive.
I put violence on 'mild' but, really, you don't see anything. And yes, I've long since noticed that the sky bears resemblance to the mac face. :D
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Awesome dude for a first flash I 'm surprised that you got that far.
A Bit Amateur, But Not Too Bad...
You made a good song selection at the very least. I rather like ELO's Mr. Bluesky, but I don't think it touches the epic quality that is "Fire On High"... So maybe you should do that song next. Any way, I like the face you made, but the lip syncing seems to be a bit off. Have you tried using your own mouth for reference? The birds and the bunny were a good touch. I can see you tried really hard in building your environment with the hilltops, streets and the city and shows off pretty well. You do know that the silhouetted buildings in the back are a good way to show off a little far off perspective within a layered design format. So to make it short, good job and good luck with your next entry.
P.S. Make it "Fire On High".
Quite nice
The movie is nice, but Id love to have better music quality ;)
not bad
I absolutely have and always will hate ELO (automatic -2) , but the vid was great.
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