Well I...hmm
Eh, your tryin. And thats more than I can say for myself. I give you an A for effort.
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This is my very first flash i have made i am still learning more about flash and the intro will play frist it is not the actually movie, the one thing i did not fix which i thought i did was the ending i forgot to make it stop but it does loops. Sorry about that. other then that i hope you enjoy and if people like it i will make more of them
Hmm
You've got the basics, but one thing that bugged me throughout was the jerkiness. You need to put more keyframes in to get a smoother animation. It's all to easy for someone to submit their first stick flash and get flamed instantly, which can put a lot of new animators off. I'd say stick at it, and really work at getting it smoother. More definition of characters never goes amiss either. and you can pad it out a bit by doing face/gun/sword close-ups. All told, it was pretty average for a first go, but by no means awful. Stick at it, I want to see what you can really do...
this is not flash
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3 for trying
No.
I am sorry, but when you are an animator, you have to make sure that when you submit a flash, that it is GOOD and not BAD. No offense to you, but when people upload their "First Flashes" they usually suck.
Just take a look at some animations or games on this site. Its for at least acceptable work.
I had to learn that the hard way,... by myself.
Trust me man, I can see you making some good flashes. You just gotta work harder!
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